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Waters

Rough waters

spine shivers

cold shakes



essence bears memory



bold hearts

beat steady

more love

makes waves

holding eternity



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19 words only please
PROMPT: Stormy Seas

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  • Tqop
    October 16
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    Water runs deep. Great job. And nice and original. Congrats on the HM.


  • BluesMan gold member
    July 11
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    Great word choice. Emotionally charged with the storm


  • islekine gold member
    July 11

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    Wonderfully penned!

    This is another really great quickie...Thanks for entering! Best wishes in the contest and always! Write on!

    and


  • penman gold member
    July 11
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    Excellent

    wonderful word choice. So perfect for the prompt. best of luck in the contest.

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    July 11
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    This is indeed a great write best to you in her contest be well.

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