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Lost in this place

Never thought I needed you,
I was strong on my own..
Oh how wrong I was baby.
Now that you are gone
My world is at a standstill
My heart no longer beats

I am so lost without you baby
Lost in a whirlwind of hurt baby
I am so lost in this place,
Confused in this place.
I am fighting for last place.

Baby, now that you are gone,
There's nothing left to live for.
My hope is vanished, behind the lyrics of a song.
My heart beat only for you.
Now it beats for nothing.

I am so lost without you baby
Lost in a whirlwind of hurt baby
I am so lost in this place,
Confused in this place.
I am fighting for last place.

I am lost in this place.
Lost without your love oh my love.
Where have you gone,
how have you done me so wrong.

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