I wasn't always broken, I wasn't always scared
I never feared of what may come, from showing how I cared
I struggle to find the words to tell you its still me
So I hold you tight in bed at night just hoping you can see
How much your still my soul mate
Despite all you put me through
After everything that's happened
baby there's only ever you
I never always cried, I knew only how to smile
But that's okay Ill smile again, it just may take a while
You hurt me deeply but the scars they are slowly gonna heal
So don't give up on trying baby tell me how you feel
Am i still your soul mate
The one who has your heart
After everything that's happened
Tell me we wont be apart
I love you with every breath I take I know you love me too
So say you wont give up on me cause I wont give up on you.........
A contest entry
- Save Our Love by Mistress Leala.
1200 points, ended July 13, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Epitome of true love!
That does not keep a balance sheet of 'give and take'; that just cares and loves 'cause it feels that way; that just is the essence of one's life. God bless you.
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It's a lovely poem that speaks from the heart and also from a slight fear that maybe after all that work in the relationship, that it will indeed fail. But you know the saying, "What doesn't kill us will make us stronger." And hopefully that is true,
Lovely poem.
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This is beautiful and heartbreaking all at the same time, reading this, I connect it to something going on in my own life, something that's been going on for a while. I love poetry I can connect to. Great write hun!
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I loved the entire write, especially the way you tied it together in the end. flowed superbly. excellent write. thanks for entering and good luck.
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