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Lift Thee

In light, o light, this hidden child
take her broken heart and make it smile
as some, rain some, and in the snow
make her ever-loving soul glow

Her beauty, shines truly
and this I note dooley

make heaven, save eleven

and take her up with thee

 

For her heart, her love

is more beautiful than a dove

and we know that in all

her smile should never fall

Author notes

Sorry people can be so rude
I know they must be dumb
and not really know you
love you and your heart
and rude people, please depart

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  • Tqop
    October 16
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    Very encouraging.

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    July 11

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    This is sweet for her oh how I want to beat someone with a bat for hurting such a sweet soul people are cruel and uncaring and so on and so forth blah