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Everytime You Touch Me

Everytime you touch me
there is feelings I hide
My weakness is you I feel inside
But no matter how hard I tried
I know my eyes never lied

Forgive my sweet pain I cried
I need to hold my pride
and break this bond I tied

Darling everytime you touch
estatic feelings burn inside
I know you see each time I sighed

But we both know these feelings must subside
Yes we have to let it slide
Even though I want you by my side

I still feel your touch in my dream
Your sapphri eyes speaks extreme
With power of love so tender
Why do I have to surender

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