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Tears to shed.

Whats he got that I do not?
If only she could see,
how special I could be.
If I touch a burning candle I can feel no pain,
If you cut me with a knife it's still the same.
And I know his heart is beating,
And I know that I am dead.
Yet the pain here I feel,
Try and tell me it's not real
For it seems that I still have a tear to shed
The sure redeeming feature
From that little creature
Is that he's alive
Everybody knows that's just a temporary state
Which is cured very quickly when we meet our fate.
If I touch a burning candle I can feel no pain
In the ice or in the sun it's all the same
Yet I feel my heart is aching
Though it doesn't beat it's breaking
And the pain here that I feel
Try and tell me it's not real
I know that I am dead
Yet it seems that I still have some tears to shed

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  • invisible heart
    October 8

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    Geart.
    Amazing.
    Painful,
    And I can really relate to this.
    I really,
    Absolutly loved reading this piece.


    (I really lykd these lines)

    `If I touch a burning candle I can feel no pain,
    If you cut me with a knife it's still the same.
    And I know his heart is beating,
    And I know that I am dead.

    Yet the pain here I feel,
    Try and tell me it's not real
    For it seems that I still have a tear to shed`


    (and I absolutly lovelove these words rite here)

    'Yet I feel my heart is aching
    Though it doesn't beat it's breaking'

    ThanX for sharing this write and great job on it.