As I stare at his stone crafted face
I think of what he must of seen and done
from the blood filled killing fields of battle
home to the land of fatherhood
His body lay un-changed as the world
envoled and multipled around him
The features on the limestone base slowly fading
as time wore on
A hand outstretched to his cherished spouse
who lies beside him in peaceful sleep
Their faithful love un-dimished by lifes'
rough road
We know little of thier lives and the hardships faced,
but there is no doubt that the spouses love will live
enternally on
Author notes
i know i've got some spelling wrong, so please point it out. thank you This poem is dedicated to two great friends, who are now married 
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It's a really good poem, and I like it a lot, but WHO IS IT ABOUT!?!? please?
OK... extensive spelling and grammar check coming up:
2nd line it should be 'must have' not 'must of'.
3rd line should be 'blood-filled'
Unchanged doesn't need a hyphon (line 5)
Line six should begin 'Evolved and multiplied'
Undiminished doesn't need a hyphon (line 11)
Also line 11 at the end it should be 'life's' not 'lifes''
Their, not thier (line 13)
And finally, on the last line it should be 'eternally' not 'enternally'.
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"who on earth is she talking about??" Says Lily.... I Agree.... Adi and Olivia??? Anyway, well written. Keep it up.
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