There's something wrong,
with the picture that I'm painting.
There's something wrong,
with the noise that we are making.
In the air tonight,
the atmosphere ain't hanging right.
And all because of you there's something wrong.
There's something wrong,
with the people in this room.
I dont belong,
I know the words but not the tune.
They keep me up at night,
and you become my only light.
But even though you're here there's something wrong.
There's something wrong wrong wrong,
with the picture that I'm painting.
Something wrong wrong wrong,
With the colours that i choose.
Something wrong wrong wrong,
With the risk that i am taking.
Every face I draw ends up as you,
And i cant get your true colours to come through.
Theres something wrong.
I'll go on painting as all good painters have to,
and i shall question every brush stroke that i use.
And i shall hang my work where no one else shall see it.
Until I get it right. I shall search for your true essence.
I'll keep on searching...as all good painters have to.
A contest entry
- I Still Haven't Found What Im Looking For. by Sacred Geometry.
400 points, ended July 27, 4 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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>< I swear i commeted on this yesterday!!!!!!
Ap hates me
but yeah. this.. is.. simply.. breathtaking. I love it so much
love you
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Amazing,
I love it, and thankyou for entering,
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of course i would enter!
love you more! mwah ha ha -
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Hidden meaning ish still beyond me, but i have several possabilities....
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Brilliant! Do you still think that you are bad at writing poetry????
Loves you hun and this is fantastic! i loved it. Amazing!
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cheers, and yes i still think i suck
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then there is something wrong with chooz this is like better than anything... im including chocolate here and anyways u cant say that no more
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