lips
tongue
fingertips
hands, skin
moments like this
breath
pulse
-nothing else
but us
deep into something
deeper than lust
more passionate
truth
touch
whispers and such
exploring
-never enough
exploring
eyes, sighs
want-to signs
hands entwined and
craving
memorize the dance
define each butterfly
each tremble of desire
we make music
by candlelight
our silhouette collide
and create fire
flames
dancing soul to soul
Please tell me what you think
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I love to read you ...
from time to time. And this poem is simply so intensely lovely. Check silhouette.
I have no idea why you are not on my favorites list, Wendy, and I corrected that. This system sometimes does weird things.
Love
Myra
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Umm mmm
Haven't read on allpoetry in awhile but your stuff is as sensual and sweet as ever. The fire burns in these smooth flowing words and images.
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Too cool
Great as always, Wendy!
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This reminds me of old UB1 ... which is a good thing.
Seductive but never vulgar.
Desiree
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beautiful
did u mean to rhyme at the start? that was the singular flaw in this, that it started as rhyming well i might add then suddenly stopped. other than that i cant spot a thing wrong maybe add a bit of imagery describe your perception but thats an option that would just enhance on near perfection
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This was beautiful.
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yes as above, the rythmn of the words was perfect. in keeping with the delicate and graceful dance that you describe.
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Hey Wenders!!!
This piece has such perfect timing (cadence). It feels..."lighter" as well. A simple exercise of beauty.
thanks for this...WRITE ON!
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Ahhh... Yes
Thanks for the memories
Even if the reality was not that good. lol
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