phones
stones
begonias
steel scrub
bath tub
ammonia
smells
shells
pretty toes
coffee
toffee
stilettos
sandals
handles
faberge'
salads
ballads
mask of clay
tapers
shapers
strike a pose
you moves
his grooves
romance grows.
A contest entry
- Shopping List by Emmyb.
550 points, ended July 16, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Reader interpretation and critical comment welcomed
Comments
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haha, cute.
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That is quite the list, now if I were to errect the male version I wonder what you would have to say.
LOL
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thank you for making the list
you gave me what I wanted
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Can`t see that it needs revising.
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Clever write...whimpsical like a lot of fun in it all, and to end it with a couple shopping together...romantic. Blessings.
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Wonderful
A very clever and well crafted list. So practical and yet romantic too. Best of luck in the contest
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