Each tear,
you left behind,
Every memory,
both beautiful and sad,
Each ache,
in your families and friends hearts,
All of these
I bring here,
to where you last stood
on a day filled with love, sun and happiness,
I will let these essences
of you
fly
into the waiting breeze,
For you
to catch
and see
and know again
that you are missed,
and still thought about
every day,
still,
Then,
I will walk away,
back into my empty life,
Wrapping up my heart
as I go
Author notes
This poem is written for my Mom.
Picture Credit : http://www.funxite.com/media/9268-loving-whisper.jpg
A contest entry
- Prompt XX by crivanea.
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Comments
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wonderful poem for your mother..thoughtful but still painful..whimsical..but still thoughtful..full of love..and pain..beautiful write..good job..i like where you take the prompt
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This poem has no descriptive words that could possibly capture it accurately. It is so sad and lonely, yet at the same time remeniscent and glorious.
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