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The Bet Of Love...

A dark angle questioned mankind
about the love that he didn't find!
he spoke with anger and hate
requested to challenge fate!

and so a Bet was placed
that would never be aced!
convinced in his heart of this
he went back to his own bliss

from the same mold two were born
with a defying sword they were torn
brought to earth Years apart
He thought , this would be art

with mountains and seas, to separate
what more is left for fate
different cultures,worlds at war!
destroyed ties like never before!

awaken in a rendered time
some thing out there was sublime
following their passion was the key
which set them on the course to be free!

blinded by what the world had to offer
they almost missed the their own coffer
and there they were...on a table
asking themselves if its a fable


and so , in the month of may
when the angels picked the day
it was time for them to meet
bring them down to each others feet

with open eyes and soul, they spoke
the defying bet was finally broke
knee on knee they felt their life
liberating the energy that's rife

the dark angel fell onto his knees
asking for forgiveness,anything they please
they said, go away and leave us be
never show your face . we are free!

now they are together for ever
a love so strong, nothing can sever
existing for one another
a love like no other...

Author notes

to Louise Diana my love! my fiancee

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