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A Glow of Perfection

Your charismatic figure
Is a glow of perfection

Your eyes mesmermize
in timeless moments

A smile so seductive
causing me to shiver

My teasing lips want....
to explore your nakedness
with warm breaths of passion
leaving no part of you untouched

I breathe you ...feel you
inside of me
Like the world come to a stop

whispering your name melodiously
in the wind for you to hear my plea

Your provocative touch....
ignites the flames of desire

Your lusful pleasures lingers
Craving to delve into my mind
my night become a day

Your tempting touch of exquisite passion
irresistible and irreplaceable
will last forever

Your flawless face I still see
Your essence is my breathless passion

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  • condor gold member
    July 12

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    A beautiful write filled with exquisite passion that just flowed from the words. You showed the depth of ones love for another and their need to connect wholly and as one. Thanks for this read.


  • penman gold member
    July 11
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    Wonderful

    A very sensual write. And very descriptive. Thank you for sharing.


  • I Wonder
    July 11
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    Well firstly there isn't enough sex

    sorry,only playin'!

    This is a very passionate piece of poetry conveying a deep need to be connected to one who ignites the flames of your desire, expressd with a love and longing.
    A very passionate poem... a pleasure to read