Does anybody hear
the words that are unspoken
does anybody see
the pain that hide deep down
does anybody know
of the pain i go through
does anybody
even have a care
the world is big and bright
and i stand in all it's might
waiting for the one
to come and rescue me
to save me form the pain
of that of which is unspoken
for someone to care
and for once even help
to save a life
of which has be broken
i stand in the middle of the church
and i see that big old cross
but i have turned my back
as i am the one left out
things are not what they seem
and i am hurting deep down
though no one can see
it is clearly there
does anbody hear
the calls for help i cry
does anybody see
the sign
does anybody know
of the hell that i've been through
does anybody care
the tears stream down my face
and the world becomes a blur
as i walk out onto that open shore
no one is around
to see what is happening
and the pain grows on
as the waves crash at my feet
i walk deeper into that cold water
as he takes away my pain
nobody listened
nobody even saw
nobody cared
and now i am gone
Author notes
This poem is in a different veiw from the song "Does anybody hear her" by casting crowns. i am NOT suicidal, so please do not judge me, even though this poem is also labeled personal.
what did you think?
Comments
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yes! is the simple and direct answer. no one likes to see others in pain, and even here where strangers mingle we do feel emotional when we see dark and sad poem which speak of death to the self. not all poems are personal poems but we can still explore emotional complexties. and i hope you do not feel like suicide. ah after the author notes then i am smiling, see, yes what i spoke then in im after your comment to me with they do hurt etc



