I close my eyes
and see your face
Upon my heart
your touch of grace
Your arms around me
your hand in mine
The taste of your lips
I can't define
Something is stirring
within my soul
My love, my life
you make me whole
You are my heart
my air, my light
You've drawn to a close
my endless night
Words we whispered
passionate, clear
Those three words
we most long to hear
Alone in the darkness
our hearts as one
You hold me until
our night is done
I wake with the light
to see your face
Upon my soul
Your touch of grace
Please tell me what you think
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Ah, such a love. You express it so well. Keep loveing!


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Thank you for your comment. I'm glad you liked it.
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How beautiful. I like the lines, "you've drawn to a close my endless night", and "you hold me until our night is done" I don't know, I think they bring the poem together nicely. There are many besutiful lines in this. I have no suggestions, just saw a typo in line 7 on "taste". Thank you for sharing.





