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[ I cast my anchor too soon ]

I cast my anchor too soon
too soon.
And fell in love with the moon.
It was just like any other day
with my brown eyed angel of June.

But I can see no way
no way
for me to be here, for me to stay.
So I'm sorry if I run
and bring down your perfect day.

It's not that I wanna be done
be done
or that you've ceased to be fun
that's not it at all.
But one day I gotta follow the sun

So nobody will see me fall
me fall
and there'll be no way to crawl
darlin, back to you.
There'll be no way to call.

Sometimes, my girl, we lose
we lose
and there's nothing you can do
but sing a different tune
darlin, and be glad that once you flew.

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  • Mystalix
    July 11

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    You know, your work just gets better and better and it was beyond amazing to begin with; so, awesome job, the words flow with a great rhythm, I love the message, perfection once again!