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Broken Promises

"I promise I won't ever hurt you again"

I'm crumpled in a ball,
my heart shattered in millions.
I feel the same old pull down,
deep inside my heart I know I'm
Broken.
I promised; Never let yourself
get hurt again.
So this I vow to myself,
I will go down with this ship.
I will sink as low as the titanic;
never to come up again.
This time, no more bull shit.
My life will come to an end here,
my soul sold to the devil.
An eternity in hell is
my sentence.

Misery forever;
happiness a far off dream

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My name is Lauren.

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    August 30

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    Oh my goodness

    I so hope this isnt a true write of your feelings today . This breaks my heart and always know the heart is stronger than you can imagine and it can love again it can live with magic if you will only allow it to be