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Die Bitch!

Let it bleed through your soul,
Etwine and twist your heart,
this hate of mine, dwell..
Screaming in agony,

I watch and pity,
your pathetic effort
Scream bitch BLEED!!!
Tonight you die!

Escape these nightmares,
Piercing screams echo,
through the silent night
this heart so black, so evil.

Suffer and take your last breath,
Die alone, bleed silently...
disappear into night,
Die this painful death.

Author notes

Im feeling unjust and frustrated. inspired through my music, for once it feels ok to feel such angst and pain....I'm not depressed just wanna scream my hate and make sure someone hears it *guitar solo* haha lol

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  • Slipz
    September 26

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    pineapple ^^

    i like this poem.
    i was reading your about me and life gets real f'in hard sometimes. .
    my dad used to sufficate me with my pillow and beat me to hell then id be the one in jail by the end of the night. . but you can allways excape the hell in this world. . you just cant do it tell you hit rock bottom "who knows when that is"
    good luck though and i love your poetry.
    Slipz aka Kayla


  • Navajo Apsara gold member
    August 12

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    Wow this is real dark, but this is a pretty good poem. Getting your frustrations out I identify when I get frustrated I get agavted and can't accomplish anything. Thank you for sharing and I really enjoyd this.


  • Treasure 5 gold member
    July 27

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    wow I am glad im not that person. It was pretty good wrtite you have, entwine and twist your heart. You must really hate some on. I am scard of that. Thamnk you for sharing it was a pleasure to read

  • Eep! Very direct, and well said. I love the raw emotion.

  • fml-x-caas
    July 11
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    very good , all i can say is scream! and dont stop.. xD

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