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Never knowing the obstacles
from at womb
we continue to live each and everyday
Never ackkowledging anything
until the strikes start throwing
strike one
You continue to allow life to flow by
thinking and praying that its just one of those days
so you allow it to fly by and pass right before your eyes
Then comes strike two
your still in your denial
your stuck
your blind between walls
your heart does not beat the same way as before
your still not being able to visualize your surroundings
STRIKE THREE
...................
The glass just shattered theres no if but ors and cans
Living each day as a New chapter in life
But tomorrow is going to be a new day
so my new chapter is already going to be planned out
No more of these strikes
Because i am planning on hitting a home run!!!

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