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Enter and Exit

Razors are exits
To dreadful places,
Most useful ti hide
Our darkest faces.

"I love you" is an entrance
That a razor may take,
But when you exit the entrance
Her heart you will break.

Destroying her life
Just by living,
Most tempting the knife,
Only pain it is giving.

You say "I'm sorry"
And she says it too,
In a matter of years,
You both say "I do".

You lurk in the shadows,
You know it's a mistake,
You know if you end it,
Her heart you will break.

You hover her body,
Your shadows intertwined,
She's sleeping so softly,
Sick thoughts in your mind.

You move down slowly,
A knife in your hand,
Soon it will be,
Her tragic end.

She shifts in her sleep,
You have been mistakened,
A slit in her eyelid,
Through noise she awakened.

You quickly decide,
To end this now,
She slits your throat first,
You question yourself how.

You fall to the floor,
She's twisted, insane,
She stands up in laughs,
But dead I shall remain.


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Sorry about the last paragraph/stanza thing I just wanted to finish it.

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  • probably the best poem i have read bty a 13 year old i awhile. (im 13)