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Your Light*

Lord may your light within,

Be the Light that never grows dim.

May your spirit light my way,

As you prepare me for each day.

 

Teach me things I ought to know,

In those places I need to grow.

Grant me patience when I pray,

To touch my soul with wisdoms way. 

 

Send me trials and lesson too,

So I'll keep depending more in you.

With open mind your will I'll veiw,

As my spirit grows to one with you.

 

The way of love Christ made plain,

Regaurdless of the strife and pain.

Your light will set my spirit free,

your love my source of strenght shall be.

 

O gentle spirit light of love,

Caress me in your wings above.

Spirit ,comforter, my shelter,

Under the skies of your umbrella

 

 

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  • darlee77 gold member
    July 16
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    Wonderful. The rhyme and flow are great. The imagery surreal. Excellent.

  • this is beautiful. the background the words the entire piece is awesome! you have a very bright light that is obvious for the world to see! great poem!!


  • good bye
    July 10

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    great my most favorite thus far

    Teach me things I ought to know,

    In those places I need to grow.

    Grant me patience when I pray,

    To touch my soul with wisdoms way.

    (wisdom's way)