I love to love
the feeling of another's embrace
that would last beyond the aeons.
Kisses chapping my lips
and still going on.
Never would I tire of that.
Gaze into eyes that speaks sonnets'
betrothed to the heated moments
between the love I love.
I love the love that makes
me want to die.
So intense that it could break bones.
Sending spine tingling chills
for minutes at a time.
You know what I'm talking about.
A love that is only felt with that one love.
I love to love a love.
Audrey Evans
7/10/2009
A contest entry
- rapture by Saffron.
1000 points, ended August 5, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is a wonderful image of love and emotion—just lovely.
Thank you so much for sharing your talent with me in this contest.
Saffron
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Thank you for your lovely support and comment. =]
Audrey Evans
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You just dont get that kinda stuff no more
A true testament to love and how beautiful and endearing it can be! BEAUTIFUL WRITE!
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yes
I love those words. Great focus on the love of the love. What a fantastic drug of an emotion. favorite:"Betrothed to the heated moments between the love I love."
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Sounds like you're longing for a sip of the strong stuff. I like the forceful yet soft way of tis. (intence-intense, though). Odd thing- I first saw the pic you have as an avatar on the cover of a c.d called "Stories for the Soul". It creeped me out because that angel looks EXACTLY like a girl I dated in high school named Kristen. Weird to see it here.
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I'm digging it
Nice line: Gaze into eyes that speak sonnets'
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