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soldiers

soldiers so far away as i pray for your safe return.
as i hear your mothers, wife,sons,daughters cry.
will my soldier come home safely too me.
soldiers so far away,
as you are over there fighting for freedom.
you are over there somewhere
so far away but yet in our hearts.
peace will come someday.
and no more soldiers will be so far away.

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