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...Sudden Halt...

Life:

 

Now of days isn't really lively;

Things are more then tough.

A tree seems so beautiful to this, a broken eye.

Almost like the world stops & becomes happy again.

It is a sign everything is okay again.

It is like a sudden halt.

 

But when everthing starts to commence once more,

It is just a reminder of good.

I think more of them now.

 

A dream is a splash of joy in my idiotic, imagining head.

It is a blind alley of things wanted but can never have.

 

Once to wake up again, I dont bear in mind the amazing details of this amusement.

Just slight tid bits of another life.

 

I think of all of this as a gift. Just like everyday.

It is something I look forward to.

I love this world no matter how hard everything gets.

Things get hard but I love every battle.

Please tell me what you think.

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