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xXx This Land ...Our Land xXx

As he walks the faded street,
the very one he fought for,
his memory dwells in awe of the sight.
The flowers looked so wilted once,
the skies were bleeding black,
but the stars and the stripes,
they were flowing in the breeze through it all.
The flag was so beautiful,
withstanding bomb and bullet,
making glorious, all the soldiers who laid eyes upon its magnificence.

 

He slunk down on the tree stump,

lost in thought and amazement,

he remembered the photo, of his grandfather,

it was torn, and smudged with dirt,

but it was him.

He thought of the stories his grandpa used to tell him,

and how he fought for freedom as well.

 

He closed his eyes ever so slowly,

whispered "God bless the U.S.A.",

the very last words of his grandfather.

He lay there, at rest, at peace;

Finally, at peace.

 

He passed away at the very spot he had combat,

he held the very flag that was waving during that war.

He is a soldier.

He is an American.

He is FREEDOM.

 

Author notes

OPTION# 2
2. Write something about personal or national independence


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My Inspiration was my grandfather,
he was in the Air Force,
and though he did not die from that, (he died of cancer 3years ago [R.I.P. Popop, I love you!]), nor did he fight in any wars,
he was the one who inspired me.



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  • mmook
    August 6
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    excellent!! well done!


  • An Old Codger gold member
    August 5
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    A wonderfully moving and patriotic write. Very deserving of the spotlight.


  • Wickedruby1 gold member
    August 5

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    Very Moving

    This is a very good write, pointing out the love of country by an elderly man. I believe most of us love our country but not enough to do anything about it. Like stand up for the things the government is removing from our lives. The absence of the Pledge of Allegiance in our schools, the removal of religious monuments from our federal buildings forbidding the Lord's Prayer from sporting events in school.
    Why did we sit and allow one woman to get this ball rolling and why do we elect officials who allow it to snow ball.

  • A wonderful inpirational write, It's always lovely to see someone who sincerely inspires us to such great lengths. It matters not that he did not fight in a war, the fact that he signed up to do so is enough. He was a hero just for that. To be apart of this nation's military on any level is part of this country's freedom, and it's an honor to have known such selfless human beings.

    Beautiful and hauntingly sad write,


  • Poetrist
    July 25

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    Both very patriotic and sad at the same time. Such a great dedication piece. I am sure your grandfather would have loved it. You don't have to actually be in combat to be a hero, just that fact that one signed over to dedicate their life to others is a true inspiration. Good luck!


  • jcat gold member
    July 20
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    Regardless of wars fought or not he is a veteran and therefore a hero of mine as well!!! A very beautiful tribute to a great man! Thank you for your entry!

  • Wow this is just awesome and the patriotism that shines through is excellent. So personal and inspirational. Another excellent entry.
    Thank you so much for joining in
    Gaylene


  • XxHysteriaxX
    July 11

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    Speechless

    I was moved by this poem. I could see it all, the imagery was perfect. This was VERY well worded, as are all of your poems my love. I am sorry about your Grandfather, there is no doubt in my mind that he was a great person. He will always be with you, though not in person, he will always have a spot in your heart because as we know, and he knows, that spot in your heart will ALWAYS be open for him, and for only him. He loves you very much, and I can see that you love him very much. Thank you for this read my love. It was very nice of you too. I love you.

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