Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

i love my fucking life!!!

i wish,
i would have appreciated it.
but i saw it all to late.
then it was all to 'God-damn late.
i thought only of myself.
obviously.
then i learned to hate.
but i wish,
i had another chance.
because i learned,
how to sing.
and i can fucking dance.
fucking dance.
i love my life.
i just couldn't stand me.
i wish,
i would been more thankful.
i wish,
i would not have been so blind.
how come i only looked?
why didn't i just see?
hind sight is twenty-twenty.
and i have saw plenty.
but through it all,
when i look back,
i have to say...

I LOVE MY FUCKING LIFE!!!
(damn skippy)


gypsyfish

just read it.

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 6 of 6

  • ears2hearyou gold member
    1 day ago
    ?
    Edit | Reply
    you're not alone....we're all going thru it with ya now!
    and by the way....my gift to you this Thanksgiving is:

    a mystical mirror:
    so you may see

    your astounding
    blinding
    spirit, beauty and courage!

    love ya sis-hang in there
    ears/Kathleen/Seattle

  • gypsyfish
    August 19
    Edit | Reply

    hey holy sis

    i'm pretty sure i'm pretty sure i'm your brother to... love gypsyfish


  • Navajo Apsara gold member
    August 12

    Edit | Reply
    This is good normally people need help to become the person they want to be. I was one to get help and I came a long way. Thanks for the remember when and thanking youfor sharing I enjoyed this.

    • gypsyfish
      August 19
      Edit | Reply

      eyes of gold

      you just can't help somebody that won't help themselves. and i appreciate your comments and you taking the time to read this. i so do. glad you liked it. love gypsyfish
      and p.s. norma! compared to what???????? love gypsyfish

  • Very well said! Are you sure your not a brother from another mother lol. Your poetry is great as ALlways and that why your my Fav. xxx holly sis


  • Treasure 5 gold member
    July 27

    Edit | Reply
    This is very good, you have to be happy with what you have because its yours. I love the way my life is too. Thank you for sharing and it was a pleasure to read

1 - 6 of 6