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People walk by
Looking at the many faces
Wondering what they see everyday
What tears have they shed

What pains they face strikes me
Thinking what challanges they face everyday
What pains hit them
What phone calls have they recieved

When will we care
About everyone everywhere



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  • Night Rose
    October 27

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    Daughter of Night

    Wow i really loved this poem not many think what others feel or wonder what goes on in thier life but you manged to take time and wonder to see what going on. Wonderful poem nick really

    sincerly,
    angel

  • Amen very good for the book

    If only we would share our journeies through each others eyes take the time to say hello and to stop and talk for just a moment often makes all thew difference in the world . Take a seat on a bench next to an elderly person in the stores and visit and eveyone has a story they so want to tell . Conections of the heart if only we would take the time to embrace one another in such a way

  • good write my friend


  • carebear123
    July 10
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    nice write. =)