Counting
Days until we
Are reunited by
The same thing that once tore apart
Everything we worked so hard for long ago.
We were both children we had so
Much to learn about not
Spending much time
Counting
Author notes
blood filled cereal
A contest entry
- 2000 tr0phies! wh00t! by amaranthine lover.
3500 points, ended August 30, 64 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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20.15 / 25
Your images are run on and that disrupts the rhythm for the reader. Nicely written, though. Thanks for entering. -
rictameters should be center aligned so that we can see the beautiful shape which they are known for. I can already see even though it is left-aligned that it will have the shape. Still, as it is in a contest, to center align it takes only a click ...
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wow...wonderful write..I love where you take me on this..lines that say so much..words that captures a single moment of childhood..and memory..thank you for entering..this is a lovely piece..
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This is very nice!
Thankyou for entering.
Good luck darling.
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