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Shades

Failing words
like failing beauty
withered
with time
blurred lines
to indistinctness
the blinding white
now infininte shades of gray
betraying the distances
between you
and me

A contest entry

Where does it take you?

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • LionessK silver member
    July 29

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    For me, this takes me to a personal (past) experience/relationship. It is a good description of what it was. I like the way you let your thoughts and words flow together here. A beautiful write.
    Thank you for entering my contest.

    Best of luck.

    ~Kristy