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[ I'm a walking sin ]

I'm a walking sin
looking for a way
to make adrenaline
(my drink of choice)
replace the orange juice
I've had for far too long

Please spike my drink



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Very personal... i feel really bad about it too...

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  • stasis
    July 11
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    Is this about last weekend? Or this last week?


    • Alive4aLiving
      July 11
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      Honestly, a mix of the two


      • stasis
        July 11
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        Do you recall what I told you last weekend?

        • Alive4aLiving
          July 12
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          No I know, I remember, and I assure you i do not feel as bad about what i have been doing as the poem suggests. It's odd but strangely enough I just don't feel bad anymore.