I'm walking alone
in the silent snow-covered sancutuary of nature
i feel invisble eyes boring into me
I call out for them, looking around
I see them,
A white rabbit, pure as snow,
the vicious, bloodthirsty coyote
staring at his prey with unforgiving intent
i watch, paralyzed with horror
i watch the coyote lunge at the poor rabbit
i watch as be sinks his afflictive fangs into the hare's flesh
he watches the terror on my frozen face
It was almost as though the attack was just for his pleasure
like he did it just to horrify me
as with only one bite he scampers off
leaving the rabbit to bleed
I rush over to the poor creature,
the surrounding snow
blood-stained crimson
crimson to match the red of it's eyes
then the screams commence
The most awful, shrill, spine-tingling screeching
the screams cause memories to surface.
Screams similar to my demons, screaming inside me
memories of times when I too
was coated in such abundant crimson blood
not caused by any vicious beast or demon
but by the demons inside of me
I panic I don't know what to do
the rabbit will die
It will die, just like my blackened soul
I'm overcome with horrendous pity
The rabbit dies
and I wake up
sound in my bed
but I will never forget
Author notes
yea... This one will definately be re-written soon. This is really a recurring nightmare I have been having, and yes it really is horrible T_T I just wish i could better capture how terrifyingvit is
What did you think?
Comments
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i think you captured that terror well here.
maybe make the sentence, "the rabbit dies", in it's own stanza. and then the "and i wake up/sound in my bed/but i will never forget" on it's own also.

