This is the world we wished for,
where no-one is judged by the colour of their skin
instead we see each other for the the beauty that lies within
Finally having the privalidge of being equil, finally
getting along as one. Protecting each other
keeping us all safe from harm
A grand new beginning, a passionate work of art
like the gentle strokes of the brush
so we live in this great big world of ours
This is no illusion as indeed it can be
if we all work together, and cherish the moments we create,
the good ones and tha bad... and learn to make the best of it
To captivate all even, trap all envyousy, and demolish all pain
Yes sometimes storms will come but we all will be safe
as long as we believe in fate,and believe in the power of love
for someone once said
''Love thy neighbour as one would love yourself''
A contest entry
- Deep Thinkers #2 (picture inspired) by delightfulmess.
1800 points, ended September 9, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A great message and a hopefull twist on the prompt.
Well done and thank you for entering my contest and also for you patience.
Delila
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Hi - I couldn't help thinking this was an interesting take on the pic. I might have added to the poem the kind of message that now we are all the same but still want to be different. Either way, I think the way you saw it was great.
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Amazing poem!
This is so beautiful, your words are so touching and honest this is an awesome poem I wish this was the new beginning the world would be so much a better place.
Good luck in this contest
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hope its good enough...
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