Through trials and tribulations
you emerged triumphantly
And rose above the chaos
with grace and sovereignty
So on your special day
the world will finally see
The fury of the storm
will now forever be
Happy Birthday Storm!
In a list
A contest entry
- A Birthday Celebratiion (For StormGoddess) by Night Valkyrie.
1000 points, ended August 5, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
No harshly critical comments please.
Comments
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Thank you Jeannie. These words you have written could never feel more true to me. You have captured me perfectly. I love your words, once again.
Thank you hun
Storm -
This is very strong and fitting of Storm to a Tee. You have shown how adversity has become her strength and lifted here even more, which is so very true. Thank you for the wonderful entry.
Best of luck in the contest.
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Well done.
I love the triumphant honesty of the first stanza; using as a metaphor her elemental strengths, yet it is the way you integrated her personal phrase into the second that makes this stand out.
I hope that she enjoys this as much as I did.
Best of luck in the contest.
Adrian
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Perfectly Crafted
Always a talent you have!
(wipes at sweat starting to bead on forehead)
This one will be tough to beat!
Good Luck in the contest!
Tang
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excellent~
A beautiful birthday poem sweetie
I can't believe I am the only one that has read this one
Unbelieveable...best of luck in the contest
It's a winner in my book.......I love the background too can I right click and save
Hugs
Susan~~~~
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Thanks, yes you can
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