Forgive me, my love
for telling all those lies.
Sit down and listen to me
and look into my eyes.
I love you so much
and I really am sorry.
These are not empty words.
This is complete honesty.
Realizing I've ruined our relationship
makes me so damn furious.
How could I ever hurt you?
I bet for you forgiveness.
Being with you forever
is my one and only dream.
Please don't ever leave.
I love you! I want to scream.
I want to share the sunsets
we used to capture every night.
They are so special to me.
Oh, what a beautiful sight!
But they also remind me of us
as we faded like the sun.
Let's bring back our love.
I promise we'll have so much fun.
It's my fault you don't trust,
but I am trying to change your mind.
Your love is what I long for.
Please don't let "us" die.
I willl give you hope
and I will give you true love.
I'll always be here for you.
You'll always be my other dove.
Author notes
this is like the first poem I have written in years. I lost my writing abilities...maybe I never had any...anywho, what do you all think?....be honest!!
What did you think
Comments
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Very good piece, the sense of regret and remorse is almost palpable in this. Not a bad come back effort I''d venture to say. I think you may want to give this one a re-read and fix some of the spelling errors I saw, but that is the only thing I can really be critical on about this piece. Look forward to reading some more of your work in the future.
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Forgiveness is divine. From the heart an abundance of thoughts speak...sincere.
Precious.
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very good, and you really have amazing writing abilities. Don't doubt that. ")
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