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I Wear His Kisses

This aroma, he said, smiling,
carries you.

 

Since then I am always with him.

 

Surrounded by golden dawn

dying into brilliant birth of roses

and jasmine; moss of odor

dreams evasive green.

 

This is the mist he held within,

eilixir of sensual

recollection.

 

Lingering, I wear his kisses,

absolute in its eminent embrace;

noteworthy its intimate tone

of sigh.

 

This aroma, I said, smiling,

carries us.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

"... It is exclusive, sophisticated, ambiguous, elegant, intellectual, independent and bold, but not very dominating.

Surely it's not for everyone. It's for exceptional, classy women, individualists, who respect everything that is lasting and eternal, complex and inaccessible. Women with a sophisticated style who know that easy solutions don't guarantee the success. They travel their difficult road ... with a of sense of humour and autoirony. "

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  • Rowan gold member
    July 26
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    Very lovely...
    Thank you.


  • klassy lassy
    July 18

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    Lovely and evocative essences of tenderness accompany descriptions here of things that decorate love. The entire poem smiles. Kisses, indeed!

  • ea silver member
    July 15

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    ooo, I love this ♥ It makes me think a little E.E. Cummings' poem, "if you like my poems, let them attend you..." The same goes for scent.


  • deercatcher
    July 11
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    I wear his kisses...

    Sounds like the name of a very sophisticated perfume...


  • tara wilson gold member
    July 11

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    i love this so much, i love how it carries you both at the end there. your voice is so soft & gentle here. enjoyed! I hope all is well with you Myra.


  • individuality gold member
    July 10

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    the scent of you in my life dear myra will always be with me, and whenever i think of your spirit i will always smile. make no mistake, i love you deeply. and i thank you for all the times you have made me smile another great poem here by your pen, you should really give your pen a raise lol it is full of flowers and fragrance that attacks the senses in a fantastic way


  • Cannonsfire
    July 10

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    Oh dear poet this is just sensually moving with a soft wistful nature to the words, it made me stop, pause and just smile at its thoughts C

  • J Macabre gold member
    July 10

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    This was so elegant and classy. this write shinned like a diamond in a case. very beautiful write.


  • CaliOkie silver member
    July 10

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    Sparkling highlights with a strong base note. Word perfume. Call it "Exquisite."

    Very well done.

    Garrison


  • Manicmuze
    July 10

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    Yummmmm ! This piece just makes me feel good. There's something so romantic about the idea of "wearing his kisses"... just beautiful
    but i can always count on beauty from you.
    loved it !
    ~ wendy


  • darell
    July 10

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    Fragrant..

    and aromatic as a sweet rain after
    a passing storm. you collected these
    memories with passion and exuberance.
    A lovely peice my friend. Good job

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