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This Desperate Betrothal of Eyes

to write light
with smiles:

light which spills itself
into the new-born cliche
of sun on wet black coal
in this dying night
of devastation;

to sphere
a globe of goodness:
still
and sad
inside this dome
of departure;

to babble silent bathos
for crying hands;
hands never again
to cup
faces; to sculpt
kisses
for forgetful fingers
that lost
the fragrance of softness;

to whisper
a white echo of wetness,
these blue orchids;
wedlocked into well
above the bicker
of farewell,

beloved:

this desperate
betrothal
of eyes
within eyes

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  • Draig aine gold member
    July 30

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    congradulations on the greenie

    oh what a web of words you weave
    to whisper
    a white echo of wetness,
    these blue orchids;
    wedlocked into well
    above the bicker
    of farewell,

    stunning


  • myrataal silver member
    July 29
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    Thank you so much ...

    for the HM. I truly appreciate this.

    Love
    Myra


  • IronIcecream
    July 10
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    oh!


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    July 10

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    to whisper
    a white echo of wetness,
    these blue orchids;
    wedlocked into well
    above the bicker
    of farewell,

    amazing word choices poetess
    absolutely Gorgeous
    God bless you my friend...