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Tree House Summer

Missing image
a tree-house summer
fell from the scrapbook,
like a maple leaf
from an ancient fall~
now
she dances,
scooped up
by the whiff of a sigh~

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  • Peteskid gold member
    July 12

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    this is a very peaceful scene, and the memories might be understandably precious..very well done...PK


  • Mari Goes gold member
    July 10

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    You do wonders writing short poems, always painting a full picture with all its contours. This one is lovely.


  • Manicmuze
    July 10

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    this is beautiful, love the last line !
    Gorgeous photo...
    nicely done, enjoye it
    ~ wendy


  • Nicolette gold member
    July 10

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    you know i love trees and leaves in poetry, my friend. so, it's quite obvious that i love what you did here. so very original and fresh this is - gorgeous and filled with a light that glows...!

    ~ Nicolette