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Glitter

I always wanted to be that girl
the one with stardust in her hair
Barbie cars and honey gold tans
strumming my guitar in old rock bands

My lips blow kisses like dandelion spores
Roaming the bodies of fleabag whores
Booze, sex, and plastic smiles
Going nowhere for pointless miles

I'm just dreaming my shitcan life away
Hoping that the glitter is here to stay
Forever locked in my lonely heart
My wilted rose, a morbid art.


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  • screengemz
    July 19

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    Great expression

    I really feel your emotion and passion in this one.
    The use of rhyme has a nice flow and the message is conveyed.
    Nice work.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    July 10

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    oh sweetie..

    this is very sad, and a bit dark..but even so this is an excellent pen as is your usual..i pray for your happiness..


  • IVth Tribulation
    July 10

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    Plesant surprise

    at first i thought it was going to be another generic read, but it wasnt and nice use of the rhyme without compromising what you were trying to convey.