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In Your Dreams






A perfect flower,
                        a perfect sunset,
                                              or perfect lover
not one the same as any other.

So,
How can we hold anyone to perfect standards?
ourselves most importantly.

Perfection can only be a static concept.
Perfection defined,
means the epitome,
the exact way for something to exist.
as a replica of a concept.

Truly only in concept can perfect exist,
for there, it is allowed to be static
forever meeting the criteria
by which it is judged.

In Nature, life is constantly changing
and no two things are identical.

So strive for excellence,
and leave perfection in your dreams.




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  • Auburn Sunrise gold member
    July 14

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    I believe we've had this "perfectionist" conversation before... lol

    You already know my thoughts on that.

    Lovely poem. Definitely made me think.... a lot.


  • JinSays gold member
    July 10

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    okay okay I get your point
    lol
    I know what you mean, and sometimes it's very difficult to accept, but since Im not the only one in the world that has that problem, I'll just mosey.
    Thank you
    love,
    jin