When you came
this summer afternoon
appeareance of a wilted rose awaken
from your craving touch
rejuvinating beauty that layed deep within
quenching this thirsty rose
blooming into passions flower
eagerly awaiting ......
A dream untouchable
came alive within me
he see right through me
Weak and limber
He leans foward
fingers tracing magnetically
A spark of chills up my spine
Awakening desire deep within me
eagerly awaiting to be heard
his voice whisper soft petals
watering a fresh flower
in lonely heart of life’s garden
his tender smile
soft, silky skin
electrifys, fulfills
and satisfies
And I give myself to him
As I sit there,
thinking.....I love him
he loves me too
I walk on clouds with silver lining
sharing every thought, heart beat
and emotion as one
I was not invisible anymore
I breathe in his breath of fresh air
He wrote his love in my heart
and give me strength
to grow brave and beautiful
A contest entry
- Prompt Contest by Riftkin.
700 points, ended July 13, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Oh My Word~
Wowzers what images You have brought to the Mind
with delicate energy to massage the senses
Excellent take on the prompt!
Adore the line:
I was not invisible anymore...
that sent chills down the spine
The beginning set the tone
and took me there
Bravo!
Congratulations on Your HM!
-throws confetti-
Woot~
Thank You for sharing Your Talent
Best wishes in all You do
with love & light~ Desire~*~
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Such a beautiful poem for the picture, you did a wonderful job in this.
Thank you for joining my contest.
Riftkin
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very sentimental and beautiful. I love the imagry, and especialy the last verse. very good write
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