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Mute

A negation of sound
Grapples her tongue
Twisting innuendos 
Into, noiseless space.

A voiceless scream
Echoes unnoticed
While spoken words
Become lost within
Song-less requiems

She dreams of sounds
of audio artisans never before
Conceived, the sensation
of vibrations racing
at light speed towards her.
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A contest entry

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  • DeJaBlue gold member
    July 9

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    'A voiceless scream
    echos unnoticed'

    I really like that part. I enjoyed your take on the prompt.
    Thanks so much for entering.