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Always and Forever

  Always and forever will I love you like a child of my own,
How I feel about you, I try to make it well known.

  I love everything about you,from your head to your tail,
I wish to keep you forever, so you'll never be up for sale.

  You make me feel protected, safe and sound,
You're the type of dog everyone wants around.

  You make sure strangers stay away,
so us both are safe day by day.

  Your bark is adorable, cute and small, But you don't care
about size, you'll protect all.

  Always and Forever will you be mine,
When I think of you, you stay in my mind.

  Always and Forever are the three words I have to say, Always and Forever in my heart you will stay....

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  • piccola silver member
    July 17

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    Nice tribute, and yes, I agree that the animals we grow to love will remain always in our heart. Thank you for entering my contest.

  • welcome to all poetry

    This is a really cute poem. Many people love their pets as though they are their children and it sounds like you dog is lucky to have you.


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  • jenala
    July 9
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    this my dog that i wrote abou