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sresdrter

sit down
testing the space.
you look at me
with a painfully familiar face.

It's been so long
you've made it this far
i coach myself
stay strong, stay strong.

one look
and my countance withers away
what happened?
so many questions flooding my mind, things i want to say.

You throw around words
and play with excuses
i half heartedly agree
friendship is a fair trade for abuses.

I see past your bitterness, and blank stare.
my worst fear is confirmed
your heart is broken
your eyes, the truth is affirmed.


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