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Sweat

Sweat drips
Sliding over sensitive skin
Slipping between my breasts

A little ball of moisture
Rolling across a seeming endless terrain

The only proof
That I am not one with the dry barren desert

Author notes

I have had writers block for weeks... forgive me if this sounds weird.

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  • Birdie
    July 9

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    This is an interesting medifor. You might want to think about making your backgrounds and print a little more readable though. Great poem!
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    • mantis180
      July 10
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      Thank you. I havent done a background in ages, and found this one (Normally I go for the standard type.) But yeah, I changed it. Thanks for commenting.