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Cruel Love

My love.
It hurts those i've given it to.
It causes them such delicious pain and grief.
I hurt them, and delight in the pain i see.

My anger.
It deals even more pain.
It causes others to shy in fear.
As they should.

My happiness.
Is in the pain of those i love, those i hurt.
It seethes in them, and makes me smile.
My cruel, evil little smile.

My pain.
Is buried deep within my heart.
It is fed by their suffering, their pain.
It grows, enticing me to let it out.

My life.
Is ruled by how much pain, how much suffering,
I can cause those around me.
I hate, and love, them all.

And they, and I, will suffer and burn in hell for it.

Author notes

B.- Any death or destruction pieces- For the contest - You can't put your arms around a memory, but you still look so pretty tied up.

A contest entry

Just a few inner demons needing to be put down.

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  • Anx2k9
    October 20
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    Amazing!.
    I'm kinda like that.

  • this is interesting......i like it.
    good job


  • AngelicGoddess
    August 13
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  • hmmmmm, causing pain to bring forth joy and happiness with suffering. Sounds like a wolf on the hunt, as they at times causes pain to a mate, but mostly to those that harm the pack.

  • Funny how the night makes you blind.

    I really like this piece. One of your best. ! This has so much pain, and emotion in it. A darker side of you, but nothing compared to what's behind your fortress of devils and demons. I really liked the flow of this too. Great job

  • this is really not you hun but okay . this is really well done and bone chillin

  • La llorona
    July 9

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    It is a bit dark for you. I honestly have difficulty believing you. However, this is one of your better-written works. The wording is both chilling and enticing. Well done!

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