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Mind is Blown

While the mind is blown; the legs still walk a bomb field.

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"Parfois, insurrection c'est resurrection." -- Victor Hugo.

[in english] "Resurrection sometimes means insurrection."

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  • aestival
    July 9

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    short but powerful. the contrast between the abstractness of blowing someone's mind & the physical act of walking is really intriguing; there are a couple ways this could be interpreted, I think. very nice!


  • Antipodi
    July 9
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    A sad but true statement about violence ...very well done dear poet

    • saddie23
      July 9
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      thank you

      Thank you for the wonderful comment and applause. Saddie23