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Opened Eyes

i feel like my eyes
have been opened for the first time
the clouds have cleared

all has been revealed for me
happiness has entered my heart
Great joy has
Overcome me

nothing can knock me
Down
i am invincible
i finally have opened eyes.

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Something really great happened today

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  • liduen silver member
    August 14
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    YAY for being happy! DD I haven't been on in AGES. But I'm back! -celebrates-

    I <3 this poem!


  • jewlinz
    July 22
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    sorry forgot the clappys!!


  • jewlinz
    July 22
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    This is really good!!! I loved this . What inspired you to write this???

  • stardust3492
    July 16
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    this is so awesome! (the poem and the topic) I especially like the last line, and how it is kind of the same as the 1st line.. One thing you might want to do is think about the capitalization because most lines you didn't capitalize the first letter but you did in a few lines, and it seems kind of random. Anyway, it is really good!!
    ,
    Carrie


  • riasme
    July 9
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    do not leave me guessing

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