I am a mirror
violently thrown on a brick wall
I am millions of tiny shattered pieces
I cut
you bleed out onto the abstraction of me
then
I am millions of tiny rose petals
as red and shiny
as a grandiose slaughter of innocence.
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oufff... mesh ma32oul.. and u posted this 2 days ago? cant say enough.. how much this feels like.. home? you are full of stories.. beautiful ones.. *bows*
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most piercing exit I've read in ages..
amazing..
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i have been having this urge to write something for the past week or so, and nothing was coming out the way i wanted it to. i think this will make me write
i love the whole scene.. the mirror breaking and shattering, i can imagine it in slow motion.. then the blood and the roses.. the last stanza gave me allusion to sthg i duno if u meant or not..
losing innocence, penetrate the flower.. i duno the last stanza kinda gives out that meaning
anyways, u are a genius, i love ur brains, i love ur words and i love u ktir!
~rana~
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i love u 2
thank u,for everything
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Huh,... wow.... this is really cool. It illustrates the duality of life and human emotion, which is in turn a mirror of life itself. There is a myth associated with Stephen King's epic apocolyptic fantasy "the Dark Tower" that fits this perfectly down to the rose petals and glass even. Have you read it?
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no i haven't which is weird since i've read most of king's work...ive heard about the dark tower though,it's a trilogy right ?
thanks for your comment my friend
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No, it's a cycle of 7 novels. It's different than anything else he's written. Even he considers it his masterpiece. Every King novel you've ever read is set within the world of the Tower. And you're welcome.
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