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Warmth

 

treasures of seasons

ebb and flow

leaving soft sighs

 

hope hides among flowers

touched by winter's cold

where fragrance seems distant

 

I relive seasons; as autumn

becomes spring

and winter summer

 

gifts form in the mind

finding its path to warmth

of my heart

 

 

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  • Rev Alimae gold member
    August 9
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    Well penned. This piece made me stop and think.

    Rev. Alimae


    • FransB gold member
      August 10
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      Thank you

      for commenting. Nice to be reminded of one's poetry. Blessings. Frans


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    August 2

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    Awwwwwww lovely poem.
    I loved the last words soooooo much...

    gifts form in the mind
    finding its path to warmth
    of my heart

    Yep..they can do this..................
    XXJeannette

    • FransB gold member
      August 2

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      I have

      so much sweeping my mind; when someone drops by and reminds of a poem, this is wonderful; but a comment like yours, a blessing. Thank you. Frans


  • Sandygram
    July 15

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    Lovely Poem!

    A perfect title for your most beautiful poem. It truly does warms the heart of the reader to read your words. So very lovely my friend. A delight to start my day with. Hope all is well.

    Peace and Grace to you.
    Sandy


    • FransB gold member
      July 15
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      Thanks Sandy

      Yes, all is OK, but as usual busy. I am preparng a paper for a conference. Blessings. Frans


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    July 10

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    Beautifully Inspirational!!

    Hope may be hiding among the flowers, yet it's always there. Thank you for sharing your heart-warming poem with all of us!!
    Peace & hugs,
    xx Cyn xx


    • FransB gold member
      July 10
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      Thanks Cyn

      Best to you; kno I appreciate your comments. Frans

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