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The Whoreus Mann Legacy

Relentless possessive men
Have created a world they coveted
By controlling the production of money
And minding who they let receive it
They have never liked me

Neither have they liked my poetry
It does not agree with their politics
Their philosophies and attitudes
Their teachers in the public screwls
Their line of despair reasoning

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